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The Chain, part 1 (10)

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Posted by AshUK on Fri 13 Jan 12, 11:57 AM to AshUK's blog.

Previous disclaimer still applies. Split into two parts because it's fucking long...

Lisa woke up in the dark. Her head hurt, and she couldn't remember much. She certainly had no idea why she was naked, or why there was a metal bracelet on her wrist. She reached around to pull on it, and found a chain, holding her to the wall. Her fingers made contact with the bracket; it was fixed solidly, and wouldn't move, no matter how hard she pulled at it.

She called out. Her voice echoed around her. She hated how scared she sounded. But she knew she was.

There was a noise; something muffled. She called out again, but got no answer.

Finally, she curled up alone in a corner, and tried to sleep.

*************************************************** *********

The lights came on in the morning. Lisa stood up, blinking her eyes. A man in a suit stood by the lightswitch, a strange smile on his face. He had a long, sharp knife in his hand; as soon as he saw her stand up he placed it carefully on a shelf.

In the other corner of the room, there was another girl, naked too, tied to a chair. She had a large piece of duct tape over her mouth.

As soon as the lights had come on, the other girl had started to try and talk. But the duct tape prevented her making any sound.

The man in the suit walked slowly towards Lisa. When he stood in front of her, he pointed to the floor and spoke a single word. “ Kneel. “

“ Fuck you. I'm not going to kneel for you. “ Lisa spat the words at him. What the hell ? She wasn't submissive. She'd never been submissive.

The man lifted his hand up to hit her, but then smiled and pulled away. Lisa stood her ground. She wasn't going to submit to this fucker. He could hit her if he wanted; it wouldn't make any difference.

But he didn't hit her. Instead, he backed away, towards the girl in the chair. Keeping his eyes on Lisa, he pulled back his hand and punched the girl full in the face. She shrieked through the duct tape as he hit her, and rocked back with the force of the blow.

“ We're going to play a little game, “ the man said. “ A game of consequences. If you don't do what I say, then I'm not going to hurt you. " He paused, and smiled. " I'm going to hurt her. Understand ? “

He lifted his fist again. “ Now kneel. “

This time, Lisa knelt.

*************************************************** *********

The next morning, when the lights came up, Lisa stayed in the corner. She wasn't going to play this sick game any more. The previous day, after she'd knelt for him, the man in the suit had made her do all kinds of twisted things, each time with the threat that the other girl would get hurt if she hadn't.

He'd asked her to suck his cock. He'd asked her to swallow his cum. He'd asked her to bend over and spread her legs so he could fuck her.

Twice she'd refused him. Twice, he'd punched the other girl hard in the face. The second time he'd caused her to pass out, and her nose and cheek to bleed.

Lisa scrabbled into the corner. No more. He could do what he wanted to the other girl, but she wasn't going to do anything more for him. She pressed her cheek against the cold tiled wall and tried to block it all out.

“ Stand. “ The man's voice was calm.

Lisa ignored him.

“ You know what I'll do if you don't. “

Still, she ignored him.

“ Very well. “

She heard the sound of a thump; of fist hitting soft skin. Muffled screaming; the sound of a chair rocking back. She closed her eyes and tried to block out the noises that tore at her heart.

Several times that day, he told her to stand, to come here, to kneel at his feet, to take his cock into her mouth. She ignored him every time.

Until the lights went off. At which point, she buried her face against the wall and cried.

*************************************************** *********

She had bad dreams that night. Horrible nightmares that caused her to shiver in the dark. And when the lights came on in the morning, she couldn't help but turn round. As soon as she'd done that, she wished she hadn't.

The other girl sat unconscious in her chair. Her face was swollen and bruised, her ribs and stomach covered with bruises. There was dried blood on her cheek.

“ Good morning, Lisa, “ the man said, his voice still calm. “ Yesterday was a difficult day for her, as you can see. What shall we do to her today ? “

“ Leave her alone ! “ Lisa screamed. “ Don't hurt her any more ! “

“ Easily done, “ the man said. “ Just do as you're told. And I won't lay a finger on her, I promise. “

Lisa snarled at him, but stood up all the same. “ Tell me what you want me to do. “

The man smiled, and throw a bundle of clothes towards her. Pale white stockings, high heels, a short skirt, and a white blouse. “ You can start by putting those on. And then you can crawl over here... on your hands and knees... and suck my cock. “

Lisa reached out a hand for the clothes.

*************************************************** *********

Later that night, when the lights were off again, Lisa lay curled in a heap on the floor, sobbing to herself. She'd been dressed like a whore, fucked and abused. Her cunt and arse were sore, and even her jaw ached from where he'd used her mouth roughly. He'd even slapped her a few times too, making Lisa wonder what exactly she'd gained by him punishing the other girl instead of her...

There was another muffled noise from across the room. Lisa crawled across the floor towards where the other girl was in her chair; a crumpled sillhouette in the dark. “ I'm sorry, “ she whispered. “ I'm so sorry. I don't know how much more of this I can take... “

Another muffled noise, different this time. It sounded like the other girl was crying. Lisa put out her hand, but couldn't reach.

Lisa bowed her head and sobbed. She knew she had no choice. Even though she'd hated every minute of the day, at least she'd been able to take it. She was strong. But the girl in the chair..

Lisa reached out again in the dark. Again, she made no contact.

Replies

13 Jan 12, 1:52 PM
meganne_in_spain
UK(PR), 4 yrs

So twisted, so sick ... a scene too far even for my imaginings ... but thankyou Ash for a very exciting story.

Nil Carborundum Illegitimo
www.costablancabdsm.com

13 Jan 12, 2:06 PM
popi*
UK(M), 7 yrs

Quick quick where's part 2?!!!!

@ToppingTools

13 Jan 12, 4:05 PM
meganne_in_spain
UK(PR), 4 yrs

Oh YES!!!!! I may nave been appalled by my horny reaction (lol) to part one .... BUT I'm waiting with baited breath for part two!!!

popi wrote:
Quick quick where's part 2?!!!!

Nil Carborundum Illegitimo
www.costablancabdsm.com

13 Jan 12, 4:44 PM
Sultry_Sub
UK, 5 mths
I must be becoming desensitised to your stories as shock and horror were absent. Warm fuzzy glow was definitely present.

Part 2 pretty please!

13 Jan 12, 4:57 PM
gastro_masochist
6 mths
Beginning to really like your work :) ditto everyone else re Part 2 please

Ib

"I'm not bothered if people in general like me or not, those that matter to me like me and that's all that counts."

13 Jan 12, 5:19 PM
Ember2b1
UK(WV), 12 mths

Sultry_Sub wrote:
I must be becoming desensitised to your stories as shock and horror were absent. Warm fuzzy glow was definitely present.

Part 2 pretty please!

Just this - worryingly!

13 Jan 12, 5:31 PM
Souci_X
UK(BA), 5 yrs

This bought back some rather lovely memories, thanks for that.
13 Jan 12, 6:33 PM
specialk_subbie
UK(OL), 4 yrs


Hot indeed, roll on part 2 :)

Specialk
have me first thing in the morning

14 Jan 12, 8:36 AM
sparklydolly
UK(HU), 2 yrs
Part 2 now please :-)

Im a broken doll, You're the puppeteer, Take control for me, And wipe away my fear - Paloma Faith

14 Jan 12, 8:40 AM
valleyrose17
UK(BS), 2 yrs
I suppose it might be interesting to do a straw poll amongst the people who like this and who fantasise about or do this type of DS, which role they would like to play - the girl being hurt or the girl being fucked..

"Fear is that little darkroom where negatives are developed" Michael Pritchard
"Once in his life, every man is entitled to fall in love with a gorgeous redhead" - Lucille Ball

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