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These are made to be read in succession and I love them beyond words. They are a re-imagining of the Persephone myth by Louise Glück. Rape, vulnerability, pain, complicity and love. They are medium length, but really worth the read.
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"A Myth of Devotion"
When Hades decided he loved this girl
he built for her a duplicate of earth,
everything the same, down to the meadow,
but with a bed added.
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Everything the same, including sunlight,
because it would be hard on a young girl
to go so quickly from bright light to utter darkness
Gradually, he thought, he'd introduce the night,
first as the shadows of fluttering leaves.
Then moon, then stars. Then no moon, no stars.
Let Persephone get used to it slowly.
In the end, he thought, she'd find it comforting.
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A replica of earth
except there was love here.
Doesn't everyone want love?
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He waited many years,
building a world, watching
Persephone in the meadow.
Persephone, a smeller, a taster.
If you have one appetite, he thought,
you have them all.
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Doesn't everyone want to feel in the night
the beloved body, compass, polestar,
to hear the quiet breathing that says
"I am alive", that means also
you are alive, because you hear me,
you are here with me. And when one turns,
the other turns—
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That's what he felt, the lord of darkness,
looking at the world he had
constructed for Persephone. It never crossed his mind
that there'd be no more smelling here,
certainly no more eating.
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Guilt? Terror? The fear of love?
These things he couldn't imagine;
no lover ever imagines them.
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He dreams, he wonders what to call this place.
First he thinks: "The New Hell". Then: "The Garden".
In the end, he decides to name it
"Persephone's Girlhood".
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A soft light rising above the level meadow,
behind the bed. He takes her in his arms.
He wants to say "I love you, nothing can hurt you"
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but he thinks
this is a lie, so he says in the end
"you're dead, nothing can hurt you"
which seems to him
a more promising beginning, more true.
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The Myth of Innocence
One summer she goes into the field as usual
stopping for a bit at the pool where she often
looks at herself, to see
if she detects any changes. She sees
the same person, the horrible mantle
of daughterliness still clinging to her.
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The sun seems, in the water, very close.
That's my uncle spying again, she thinks—
everything in nature is in some way her relative.
"I am never alone", she thinks,
turning the thought into a prayer.
Then death appears, like the answer to a prayer.
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No one understands anymore
how beautiful he was. But Persephone remembers.
Also that he embraced her, right there,
with her uncle watching. She remembers
sunlight flashing on his bare arms.
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This is the last moment she remembers clearly.
Then the dark god bore her away.
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She also remembers, less clearly,
the chilling insight that from this moment
she couldn't live without him again.
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The girl who disappears from the pool
will never return. A woman will return,
looking for the girl she was.
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She stands by the pool saying, from time to time,
"I was abducted", but it sounds
wrong to her, nothing like what she felt.
Then she says, "I was not abducted."
Then she says, "I offered myself, I wanted
to escape my body." Even, sometimes,
"I willed this." But ignorance
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cannot will knowledge. Ignorance
wills something imagined, which it believes exists.
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All the different nouns—
she says them in rotation.
"Death, husband, god, stranger."
Everything sounds so simple, so conventional.
I must have been, she thinks, a simple girl.
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She can't remember herself as that person
but she keeps thinking the pool will remember
and explain to her the meaning of her prayer
so she can understand
whether it was answered or not.
Edited Sun 5 Sep 10, 7:36 PM by Will_and_Echo
| 5 Sep 10, 7:46 PM LittleEl UK, 9 yrs |
Unutterably lovely. Thank you for posting this! You're a terrific person. You're my favourite person. But every once in a while, you can be a real cunt. | |
| 5 Sep 10, 11:11 PM Will_and_Echo UK(SW), 4 yrs    |
Her other work is well worth a look too, she is very talented. You might also want to try and find some of Anne Michaels poems; they have the same tone. Exx "You'll find the shame is like the pain, you only feel it once." | |
| 6 Sep 10, 6:32 PM The_Businessman UK(N), 3 yrs |
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