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Posted by relaxed1 on Tue 10 Aug 10, 1:51 PM to relaxed1's blog.

Although this was written as a religious poem, I think it works on another level. With the substitution of 'God' (as I would always seek to do anyway) for 'dominant' or 'master', it takes on a whole different slant.

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THROW away thy rod, Throw away thy wrath : O my God, Take the gentle path.

For my hearts desire Unto thine is bent : I aspire To a full consent.

Nor a word or look I affect to own, But by book, And thy book alone.

Though I fail, I weep : Though I halt in pace, Yet I creep To the throne of grace.

Then let wrath remove ; Love will do the deed : For with love Stonie hearts will bleed.

Love is swift of foot ; Love's a man of warre, And can shoot, And can hit from farre.

Who can scape his bow ? That which wrought on thee, Brought thee low, Needs must work on me.

Throw away thy rod ; Though man frailties hath, Thou art God : Throw away thy wrath

George Herbert (1593-1633)

Edited Tue 10 Aug 10, 2:08 PM by relaxed1

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11 Aug 10, 4:17 PM
Manson
UK(M), 2 yrs

Brings back memories of studying 17th Century Poetry as an undergraduate.

For some reason I always preferred the Cavalier poets rather than the religious stuff :) But this is an interesting take on Herbert's piece.

As soon as you trust yourself, you will know how to live. - Goethe.

12 Aug 10, 3:49 PM
chelsea
UK(NW), 5 yrs

"To understand the heart and mind of a person, look not at what he has already achieved, but at what he aspires to." Kahlil Gibran

Have a beautiful weekend

Love and peace.
Namaste
chelsea

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