Writing: I Wonder (4)

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Posted by feitheachd on Fri 20 Jun 08, 2:10 PM

I wonder.

If I was to kneel at your feet, take your hand in mine and say, slowly and calmly, that I'd do anything to see you smile.

I wonder.

Would you laugh and tell me to get up and stop being so silly?

Or.

Would you smirk and tell me to make you a cup of coffee or to go clean the bath?

Or, I wonder.

Would you look in my eyes and see the truth?

Could my craving cause you to crave?

I wonder.

Would you smile?

Replies

20 Jun 08, 3:20 PM
LadyMidnight
UK(CF), 16 mths
Beautiful writing!
And yes I would smile! Apparently I always do.
To see a world in a grain of sand, And a heaven in a wild flower, Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, And eternity in an hour. (William Blake 'Auguries of Innocence')

20 Jun 08, 3:50 PM
feitheachd
UK, 3 yrs
Y!
Thank you so much for the kind comment.
That smile is spreading.
"Treat a man as he is and he will remain as he is. Treat a man as he can and should be, and he will become as he can and should be." ::Johann Wolfgang von Goethe::

3 Jul 08, 8:50 AM
Miss_Namio
UK(BA), 2 yrs

I am smiling as I write this; Why does such an honestly, simply written exemplar of essential submission bring out the feline in me?
Offer fluttering prey to a cat - she *may* decide to kill it, or play with it for a little...
But I am a total N00B feel free to L your As O and flame me

3 Jul 08, 4:58 PM
feitheachd
UK, 3 yrs
Y!

Miss_Namio wrote:
Offer fluttering prey to a cat - she *may* decide to kill it, or play with it for a little...
And it would be worth it, just to hear her purr.
"Treat a man as he is and he will remain as he is. Treat a man as he can and should be, and he will become as he can and should be." ::Johann Wolfgang von Goethe::


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