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| totallycoverme |
im menna be revising but i'm instead writing some erotica whilst waiting for someone to get back to msn 
(alright stop playing with it sir ) so yeah, story...
in real life, i'd spent a lot of time keeping you waiting for me to be about to meet up. This was on account of a lame excuse really in how i hadn't done my real life homework. As a result, we decided to do some schoolroom roleplay...
I sit there at my desk waiting for you to enter the room. I look down at my outfit and giggle at how cute and funny it looks at the same time; school tie, white shirt, stockings and short skirt. You're taking ages to come into the room so I think to myself
"bollocks to this i'm gonna have myself a lil snooze on the desk, just like in real school"
anyways, i lull my head down on the desk and close my eyes for what feels like around five mintues. I decide to keep them closed, I think you might have entered the room but i'm not sure. So i figure it's probably best to remain still even though the posistion in which i present myself probably isn't creating a good impression, i'm sure you won't mind that much!
as if from nowhere, i feel a tight grip at the back of my head. You are grabbing my hair from behind. I can feel and hear you breathing as you stand behind me. I feel your hot breath move closer towards the back of my neck until suddenly you snap my head back and growl in my ear,
"i think someone's been falling asleep in class as well as not doing her homework, am I right slut?"
"yes sir" i reply, "you're always right sir"
you move round to the front of the desk and stand there for a few short, sharp seconds. SLAP!....I cower back and hold my cheek in shock,
"I didn't ask for a fucking lecture whore" you snarl
with that, you grab me by the ears and pull me away from the desk. I am forced to scurry quickly due to the force with which you're pulling on them. You march me around the room until we arrive back at the desk.
"bend over the desk slut" you laugh
I do so and wince as i see you get the cane out of your suitcase. I decide to close my eyes and brace myself. Within seconds though, my eyes pop open as i feel you whip down my skirt and my knickers, both at the same time. I notice that i feel suddenly very bare and very exposed as a result of such a sudden action being done to me in this position.
I sigh with anxiety as the cane only strokes my arse for a while. I try to hope that maybe, just maybe, you won't actually hit me with it. When I have reached a state of relaxation WHACK! I gasp in shock and pain as the cane hits me so hard and so quickly
"You have thirty more strikes to come with this. Do you know why whore?"
"yes sir"
WHACK! "why then you slutty little whore"
"because of the number of times i forgot to call you sir since we last played sir"
I start to breath really fast and raggedly knowing that this punishment is starting to look very unavoidable
As the cane continues to swish down so repeatedly on my flesh i start to yelp a lot louder than i expected to. i have lost count of the number of times i've been hit and my mind starts to wonder even though i am very aware of the pain.
"Thirty" I hear you breath behind me
I sigh and collapse in relief on the top of the desk as you stand in front of me and stroke my hair.
"now what have you been doing that's so much more importnant that doing your homework and getting a good nights sleep?" you ask
"Sir, I.."
"no, don't tell me" you laugh, "you've been spending too much time masturbating you little fucking slut, haven't you?"
I look up to meet your eye contact, "yes sir" I wince, I couldn't deny it
"very well" you laugh, "perhaps I should see what is so appealing about mastubating for you that makes you prioritise it over being respectful to me" you taunt..."stand in the corner, and strip, you'd love to do that wouldn't you whore?"
"yes sir" i say as i feel myself flush hot with embarrassment and excitement
I am soon naked in the corner of the room. I feel very exposed but i am not so foolish that i make the effort to cover my dignity.
"Now kneal down and face me slut" you order.
As i do so, you hand me my favourite vibrator, the silver one that takes those big fuck off batteries lol.
"go on then" you snarl, "Masterbate in front of me"
I look down at the floor at start pushing the vibe against my clit. fortunately, i am already wet so i am relieved to notice that my body is ready to masturbate even though doing it in front of someone like this isn't the easiest context not to feel over exposed in.
You cup my face as i continue to masturbate and pull my head up to meet your eye contact.
"good girl, keep going and keep looking into my eyes" you say quietly
as I start to climax, i find it increasingly hard to maintain eye contact. Each time you pull my ears aggressively as a result of this, occaisionally slapping and grabbing at my breasts too. Eventually, i reach the edge and throw my head back. Just as i feel a huge gutteral scream about to emerge from my lungs, you abruptly pull the vibrator out of my hands
"no i pant, fucking no, please sir, please please please let me finish" i beg
you reach down to twist my nipples, "don't fucking question me cunt"
with that, you peg my left and then right nipple. The pain sears through me. I wince as i find it both painful yet arousing.
"you don't get your pleasure until i get mine you fucking slut" you growl, "i'm not taking those pegs off until you've made me cum and i don't know if you deserve to cum yourself yet"
I whimper as I feel my cunt pounding and know that i can't attend to it, it makes me feel selfish, i know what i have to do...
"please sir, please let me have your cock in my mouth sir" I beg
I don't have to beg anymore, you pull your trousers and pants down enough so i can see how hard you are. It already looks like it's throbbing quite a lot.
"Stawberry or banana" you smile
"Strawberry please sir" i giggle
as soon as the condom is in place i'm in there like a fucking bitch hound at a weiner sausage. It is so big that i get jaw ache but it tastes and feels so good that it doesn't bother me. I occasionally feel the pangs of pain in my nipples but luckily i am very happily occupied with what i am currently doing.
As I continue to run my tounge around the tip of your cock i can feel it pulsating quite heavily. My mind starts to throb just as much until suddenly i hear you shout out animalistically then flop exhaustedly. I smile inside as i know i have brought you pleasure.
I let it slide out of my mouth as you stroke my head as i stay knealing. Eventually you sit down at the desk and order me to crawl and sit in front of you.
I kneal at your feet with my eyes downcast, looking at the pegs and fearing the pain that will occur when they are removed. You start to massage my shoulders. As you run your fingers over my collar bone and then down towards my breasts, I whimper though fear of what's probably about to happen next...
"AAAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" i yell as i begin to pant and whimper, "please sir, please please please rub the pain away, please sir it hurts so much" i beg
"hmmmm, well you did do a good job in bringing me pleasure and you did take all those cane strikes. I'm not sure though, it's also quite fun to watch you in pain like that" you laugh..."what do you choose slut? to have your nipples rubbed better, or to be given the vibrator back and be allowed to cum?"....
there is no contest, so there i am knealing in front of you with my nipples throbbing in agony whilst i'm pounding my cunt with the vibe. The extremity of sensations makes me cum very much in a very noisy and prolonged fashion. The feeling of release is much welcomed. Once a huge rush of cum rushes out of me you reach down to take the vibrator from me. I then collapse on the floor and you sit down with me and start stroking my head. I start to purr,
"haha, i think it'll have to be kitty play next my horney little slut" you laugh as you pull demandingly at my hair...
TO BE CONTINUED
fook where did all that study time go...oh well back to the grind, this time tomorrow it'll be over and then it'll be a month of play and job hunting, talk soon fans 
xx
| 22 May 08, 10:23 AM Panzuzu 6 yrs |
Spellcheck is your friend! | ||||
| 22 May 08, 7:41 PM rubberswitch UK(WF), 4 yrs  |
LEAV MY SUB ALONE OR TALK TO ME Mart_Rubber_Switch | ||||
| 23 May 08, 6:50 AM Panzuzu 6 yrs |
Okey doke. Your sub appears to be illiterate. Unless I'm missing the joke in the stuck caps lock, you appear to be an idiot. *dusts hands and feels content with a job well done* | ||||
| 23 May 08, 4:59 PM totallycoverme UK(M), 4 yrs |
bloody hell mate calm down lol twas just having a bit of fun writing a story..to be fair it is nicer to read a story that has good spelling and grammar but like, don't bring me or my Dom down man, I'm only in one of the country's top twenty unis and he's only one of the nicest guys you'll ever meet chill!
Edited 23 May 08, 5:01 PM by totallycoverme | ||||
| 23 May 08, 5:21 PM Panzuzu 6 yrs |
*Builds rocket to moon* In fairness, it's worth remembering that a literary critique doesn't reflect on you as a person, you seem perfectly nice, and I'm sure he is too when not typing with his buttocks. But that piece of writing, outside of promising subject matter, should make you fucking ashamed. All humour aside, I am not joking. It is beyond bad, it is retarded. If you seriously think that's acceptable levels of literacy for a student, then by christ give your place up to someone with an iota of academic self respect. Now, help me down off my soapbox.... | ||||
| 23 May 08, 5:56 PM totallycoverme UK(M), 4 yrs |
you don't sound like a bad bloke really, just a strongly opinioned one...
thus i challenge you! i am always up for improving my writing..show me your erotica, tell me what you don't like about mine and how you think it could be improved...admittedly i do think i have written better stories but yeah, it's cool to recieve such opinionated feedback because i'm always being told how good my creative writing is (cv withheld for the sake of space and time so yeah, come back and take me up on the above, bring it ON!!!!
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| 23 May 08, 6:02 PM Panzuzu 6 yrs |
Seriously, I'm happy to put my money where my mouth is and assist, if thats helpful. Just make him take the damn caps lock off! Anything other then being upper-cased to bits. | ||||
| 23 May 08, 6:08 PM totallycoverme UK(M), 4 yrs |
ok cool, we'll stop writing with bad spelling and cap locks if you write us a really HOTT! story! this is getting fun lol | ||||
| 23 May 08, 6:31 PM Panzuzu 6 yrs |
Mm, well, I was more thinking of putting on my grammar nazi hat and correcting your work. I'm more of a 'get out and do it' then 'write it down' chap. But, I can probably do you a very domly 1000 word essay on why LOL is a bad word to use. Any takers? | ||||
| 23 May 08, 6:39 PM totallycoverme UK(M), 4 yrs |
ah yeah actually that is a good point... i do try to avoid using lol in my stories as it kills the mood...i bunged it in there coz the silver vibe thing is a bit of an in joke thing to all me mates who've seen it/seen me use it lol...ekk soz was that too much info lol see wot u mean though coz i real lyf i talk n type like this but alternatively, when writing like an undergraduate, it often turns out that I do have to refrain from talking like a real person hehe, yeh i can relate...i think since going out and getting play my erotic writing may not be as good as in the back of my mind im always thinking "fuck i wish i were doing this in real life" whereas when i wrote as someone who didnt play as much, it all seemed a bit more fantastical and was all i had to go on at the time lol i know lol isn't a great thing to use but i do lol in real life quite a lot so im glad it's part of our texty speaky world lol..grr shit done it again hehe
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