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| Sun 1 Jul 07, 12:19 AM Evil_Elles_Vis FR, 5 yrs   |
Hi guys and gals, I've just changed my profile but I was just wondering if anyone wanted to add any constructive criticism on how to make it better. many thanks teethgrinder | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 12:21 AM Mistress_B UK, 6 yrs |
Sorry to say this but checking spelling, grammar, punctuation and capital letters would not go amiss! You did ask!! | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 12:24 AM bohnanza UK(FK), 12 yrs |
No one is going to contact you with an idea of forming a relationship while you are out of the country. Added to that being male and sub will reduce the people who want to contact you by a huge margin. The most attractive profiles have 70% of the profile about you and 30% about the person you want to meet. Women on here, in a thread the other week, said they don't look at profiles, they look at posts. Science, the only religion that works even if you don't believe in it. | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 12:36 AM MarkVarley  UK(PE), 7 yrs |
don't write a profile like mine, way too long and no-one reads it. except my ex wife but she's stalking me anyway... | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 1:04 AM Evil_Elles_Vis FR, 5 yrs |
any better? | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 1:56 AM Miss_Lead UK(HP), 6 yrs |
I like it, think it reads well and shares what you are about and what you truly seek ... good luck - shame I dont snowboard "Be careful Anais, abnormal pleasures kill the taste for normal ones."
~ Eduardo, (Anais Nin's Cousin in the movie Henry & June) | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 2:06 AM MarkVarley UK(PE), 7 yrs |
Nailed to a plank of wood? are you mad? | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 2:18 AM Evil_Elles_Vis FR, 5 yrs |
Nailed to a plank of wood!!! sounds fun don't it. | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 2:20 AM Evil_Elles_Vis FR, 5 yrs |
when did you want to book you lesson? | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 8:26 AM Ariane 8 yrs |
1. I'd re-assess your name. How's that for starting at square one? Just brings less than ideal imagery. 2. Good job writing about your interests as a person. The filmmaking drew my eye as we have that in common. Too many male subs go on about what they want done to them and their ideal woman, which you've sort of joked about. Speaking of which... 3. That word, pro. Maybe you meant pro-snowboarding? If so, should be made more clear. Or you'll only hear from pro-Dommes. 4. Your location is too vague. You can put something in the text about world travel, but if no one knows what part of the country you're based in, they won't know you're just down the road and worth inviting to the local munch or other event.
Get a pic up. Someone who does world class snowboarding may be really fit... Ariane A friend will help you move. A REAL friend will help you move a body. But moving in the rain requires a sub... | ||
| 1 Jul 07, 8:42 AM River_Deep UK, 6 yrs |
I am not a profile reader - Bohnanza is right as far as I am concerned there. I have met a few people of here and it was because they posted something interesting that then led me to their profile. If you are out of the country I would be using that time posting and getting noticed that way. Get included in discussions. Show you have a witty side, a side that can debate a little. Show you are a person behind the profile by filling it out with who you are on the boards if you cannot get to munches/clubs r/t. I like the bit about the snowboarding as well. It gives you another dimension. Makes you look like more than a man wanting to be Dommed/Topped. For me it is now the vanilla side that interests before the D/s or BDSM side. I have learnt my lesson by trying it the other way round. Best of luck, oh and I would add my vote to changing your name too for the reason already given by the lovely Ariane. D xx |
"Bizarre but right at home"
